So you’ve inadvertently trapped an ancient trans-dimensional god in your backyard shed; what do you do? That’s what Venus McKenzy and her friends would like to know.
I like this section. This is an interesting story. It sets up the king'strengths/weaknesses well. I like your use of words as names (e.g. Continuance,Brilliance). There are some minor edits (is it Elder's or Elders?. The story flows quite well.