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Dearest readers, backers and devoted followers! 

 Happy New Year!

 As some of you are aware, I got the cover done. Thank you so much Melissa berg!

 Over the last few months I have fallen in love with editminnion.com, this is a free editing tool every writer needs!

 I have been delinquent with posting a new chapter(S). "Tis the season”, is an excuse I am loathe to use, but I am anyway. 

 Expect some improved differences (I hope) today when I put up the new chapter 1. I would love to hear some feed back.

 I have begun working with John Robin on a structural / developmental editorial assessment, through his Story Perfect Editing Services company. You can find out more with the following link.

http://www.storyperfectediting.com/

 As my project on inkshares dwindles down, I realise part of the reason for my lack of success, is lack of participation, updates and consistency with putting up chapters. I will be improving on this with the support of John Robin and others.

 For those faithful few who are still wanting to see this work publish, you an follow me on my website and twitter.

 www.jodhanford.com

@jodhanford

Thank you all, and good day!

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    Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of Signs in Steel
    Ever play Skyrim? (who hasn't.) I'm seeing Markarth. I love that city. And I love your description. You've taken me right back there. 
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      The massive keep, called upper Harrowhearth, housed things like the barracks for the militia, the historical archives, and the chamber of the elders where prominent clan leaders would meet to discuss this-that-and-the-other.
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      Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of Signs in Steel
      Ha! I like that. Despite AAALLLL that he's gone through this morning... new inexplicable powers and a shadowy figure meaning to strike him down with the master's own sword, he STILL wants to haul the greystone. I really do like that detail. It establishes him so well.
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        Not one to leave a job half finished,
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        Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of Signs in Steel
        Oh hell yeah. :D
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          Joseph Asphahani highlighted an excerpt from Signs in Steel
          how he could use it.
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          Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of Signs in Steel
          ....hold on now... How big is this quarry?!? I might have missed the detail, but I don't think you described it? (OR, it could be VERY cool if when Whymer flung it out during the struggle, it sailed through the air impossibly far - lending another degree of mystery to this event... Anyhow, this part right here doesn't add up, perhaps. I imagined a massive quarry.)
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            The thing had claimed the sword he had flung across the quarry,
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