Thomas J. Arnold commented on And the Wolf Shall Dwell
I think the headlines for chapters would be fine, though I may be biased since I sort of do the same thing.  With mine though its probably best thought of as headlines for larger parts, and these parts are made up of smaller non-headlined chapters.

So far what I've liked what I've seen, but I have admittedly only had time to skim.  My work week tends towards the hectic side, but I'll try to remember to do a full reading this weekend and get back to you.
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    London. Just a routine day? A death in a train station thrusts John to a world of espionage, politics and Jihadi terrorism
    Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Dax Harrison

    Hello readers!

    Things have been a little quiet around here, but I wanted to touch base with you all really quick and let you know that things are still very much in motion.

    The Inkshares team is patiently waiting for me to finish up the Dax manuscript, at which point editing & production will finally begin!

    "How long will that be, Tony?"
    Well, to be perfectly honest, I have no idea. This is my first go around the whole authoring/editing/publishing block. Rest assured, I'm pushing to write as much as I can every day.


    What I CAN tell you is that the writing is moving steadily along. My biggest obstacle in redrafting the story is reminding myself to reign it all into something cohesive and not shoot off into a million directions and tangents. While the original Dax screenplay told a very direct story out of necessity, novelization opens SO MANY possibilities. Different viewpoints, more commentary, exploring the inner thoughts of the characters, etc. And as I move along, I find myself wanting to scratch that itch more and more.

    So I'm doing my best to find a good balance between editing/expanding the original material and just getting the darn thing done. Maybe I'll save the rest for the sequel... :)

    "Really? You're already planning a sequel?"
    Yep!

    "This isn't another one of those Hunger Maze Divergent Runner Games things where you're going to rope me into buying 3 or 4 books just to finish the story, is it?"
    Haha, nope. No offense to those books, but I set out to make Dax one complete adventure. Period. But if that leaves people interested in more wacky adventures, I've got another one in the tank. Maybe two. Think more Indiana Jones or James Bond rather than The Lord of The Rings.

    "So can you at least tell me around when to expect my book?"
    If I keep my current pace, I'm hoping to turn in the manuscript before the end of next month. I will of course keep you updated should that change.

    What I can also tell you is that the Inkshares team estimates roughly a 4 1/2 month turnaround time from when I hand over the manuscript to the completed publishing of the book. That of course can also change depending on the length of the text, the amount of editing required, and so on. But this at least gives you folks a better idea of the expected time frame.

    "Hey, I won one of your mug contests a while back. Where's my mug?"
    Apologies for the delays. I finally got all the mugs to the post office early yesterday. I hope they find their way to you safely and shortly. If you want, send me a pic on Twitter (@rockhollywood8) of you enjoying it and it will warm my heart. :)

    "Anything else I should know?"
    Yes! Chapter 1 is not actually the start of the book! I've been keeping a secret prologue from you all, which I just finished rewriting. I was going to save it until the book released, but what the heck. I am sending it to your inboxes as we speak. You can also read it here at Inkshares.

    That's all for now, folks. Back to the grindstone!

    -Tony
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      Hello, my dear animals! This will be the last update you’ll hear from me for a while, fortunately or unfortunately. I’ll be dialing down the frequency from twice a week to once a month. And this update in particular will go by fast, so don’t blink!


      I shot (and heavily edited!) my last Reader-Raffle drawing earlier today. I got my kids to fill the starring roles again, and I could barely contain the chaos that ensued. I want you to know that after the 5 minute drawing, I had an extra minute in which I thank everyone one more time and then plug two inkshares books worth your time, attention, and money (including extra inkshares credits if you got ‘em!). They were “Deus Hex Machina” by Amanda Orneck - a book I have been really, really looking forward to since I first visited the website - and “Transilience” by Kevin Bragg - a book I just recently discovered and instantly fell in love with. 


      Look, don’t let your purchase of “The Animal in Man” be the only interaction you have with Inkshares. Get back to the website and check in on the hundreds of other books they offer. Great books by great authors who have great stories to tell, who are working really hard to get published. I know a great majority of my followers probably still have credits attached to their inkshares accounts, credits still unclaimed in their emails, and more still potential credits to earn by signing in and clicking “Recommend via Inkshares.” Why the heck wouldn’t you want to spend free money?


      Finally, I want you to know I’ve been busy this weekend. I had kind of like a nesting instinct. My baby’s going to be born soon, right, so I rearranged the basement, I dug out my outline document, revised it a bit, and made a poster. Hung up a poster, a calendar. Most importantly I taped my favorite fortune cookie on the wall, the one I’ve carried in my wallet for three years or more: “Do Not Fear Failure.” This is where The Animal in Man will be born. 

      ...also there’s a kid watching Frozen, again, in the background. Again. Please don’t think I’m staging that for cuteness’ sake. I’m really not. I. Am. In. Frozen. Hell. Writing this book might help me thaw my way out. Hopefully.

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        Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for The Last Machine in the Solar System

        My dear Machiners, 

        Where do I begin? I will start by saying that I have now had over 48 hours to decompress. I took some extra time before writing my post-Sword & Laser update. I just didn’t quite feel that I was coherent enough to write the update I wanted in the immediate aftermath. At this point, the fact that I can call myself a “soon to be published author” has not fully sunk in. That this story, which I poured myself into, will be in print and on a bookstore shelf is still hard to believe. When I do see it on that shelf, it will be serious reality check time. 

        For now I must say Thank YOU. Thank you with all my heart. I cannot thank everybody enough. I want to stress and stress some more that this was an unbelievable team effort. I wrote the story but bringing it to a wider audience through crowdfunding on Inkshares was undeniably a group effort. And a tremendous one at that. Many, many people went above and beyond the call to bring new readers to our cause. 

        To illustrate this unbelievable outreach, we can break the campaign into two chunks. There were the first 4.5 weeks of the campaign: We brought in 170 readers and this was phenomenal. We were in a strong 2nd place position and hoped it would be enough to stay in the top 3. Then there was the final 1.5 weeks of the contest - and we brought in 180 readers! In my wildest dreams I would never have expected to more than double what we did in over a month in just 10 days. Thank you for the incredible support to finish this race. I feel honored and humbled. I want all of you to feel that you had a hand in making this happen. Because it’s true. The eBook or paperback you receive is yours as much as it is mine, and far beyond the money you contributed. 

        I must give a hearty salute to my co-winners Joseph Asphahani author of The Animal in Man and Craig Munro the author of The Bones of the Past. It was an absolute pleasure to compete against them. An experience that was full of camaraderie and goodwill. Their books are awesome and I look forward to receiving my copy of both. It is well worth your time to go check them out, and also the other excellent work by talented authors in the top 10 in the Sword & Laser contest. The contest was filled with wonderful creative work - those outside the top 10 also deserve your consideration. Here is the rest of the top 10:

        Adam Greven and Matt Deller’s The Knight Proper 

        Byron Gillian’s The Children of the Forest 

        Amanda Ornekc’s Deus Hex Machina 

        Andre Brun’s Lies and Deception 

        Michael Sebby’s The Inhabitants: An Unremembered Life 

        Alexander Barnes’s The Amaranth Chronicles: Deviant Rising 

        Edmond J. Wedge’s Ocean Black: The Noble Exiles


        The journey is just beginning for The Last Machine in the Solar System. There will be future updates as we continue down the road toward publication. This is all new and exciting for me and I am sure I will learn something each day. I look forward to sharing that with you, my benefactors. Without you I would not be here, and neither would this story. 

        Until next time, 

         -Matthew 

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          Hello humans,

          Just  a quick update - I'm still very much a corporeal being in this reality, rumors of my untimely dematerialization have been greatly exaggerated.

          So, I've finished revising character sheets, which can be fun and a chore at the same time (especially when you just want to get stuck back into the writing).  No only do I better understand my characters, I also know a lot more about the world/galaxy/universe I'm building (sci-fi is BIG).  As a result, I have begun tweaking Genesis to include these new developments, which I think will make the story more interesting.

          Those of you with writing experience know that this is the reverse method, especially for someone who had very little exposure to fiction writing.  My consolation is that I didn't succumb to world-builder's disease.  Haha.  Anyway, I've begun first pass author-edits on Chapters 3 and beyond and hope to get a second pass editing soon after.

          To those of you who have $5 credit from pre-ordering before the 31st Oct 2015, here's how you can further assit me by pre-ordering the e-book for FREE:

          1. Sign-in
          2. Click on INKSHARES (next to Recommend via)
          3. Wait 5 minutes for your confirmation email, then click CLAIM
          4. Pre-order e-book (credits are automatically applied)

          Live long and prosper!

          P/S: Congratulations to the winners of the Sword & Laser sequel contest! Matt, I knew you could do it! Well done!


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            Hello and Happy Saturday!  Here we have a short video where we determine the winner of the McCall's Meat and Fish Company gift certificate raffle.  So sit back and enjoy, especially the last seconds, which include an amusing directorial snafu!  

            https://youtu.be/PNyFq2z7-Rs

            As of today only 78 copies of "Women Like Us" need to sell and we'll have met the goal for Quill Publishing. If you're like me you want to hold this book in your hands, and we're getting closer every day. But there's only a month left, so please pre-order if you haven't, and if you have there's nothing wrong with having that back-up copy, just in case!

            Finally, stay tuned for an announcement next week about one more beagle-freedom related raffle that you can get in on if you already haven't. This  one involves a tattoo!


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              Thomas J. Arnold sent an update for Exile, Magus

              Saturday update time.  A bit later in the day than I intended, but with the combination of the campaign and my work schedule I have been somewhat neglectful of family so I gladly took some time to remedy that a little with a bit of a hangout, dine, and game session with my brother.


              First off, congratulations to the winners of the latest Sword and Laser contest:  Joseph Asphahani (The Animal in Man);  Matthew Isaac Sobin (The Last Machine in the Solar System);  and Craig Munro (The Bones of the Past).  In addition to what I've read of each book being well written, intriguing, and most definitely deserving of this honor, from my interactions with each of them they all seem to be wonderful people as well.  If you haven't already checked out their books, then do yourself a favor and go do so now.  While you're at it also check out the remainder of the top 10, especially three of my favorites:  Adam Greven and Matt Deller’s The Knight Proper;   Byron Gillian’s The Children of the Forest;   and  Amanda Orneck’s Deus Hex Machina.

              Now on to the current state of my campaign.  We're still moving ahead and had a brief uptick in the normal sales which I suspect was mainly due to the efforts of a number of fellow Inkshares authors, but that has since slowed considerably.  We're currently at 85 copies ordered, and with only 5 days left in the campaign we are in need of quite a large surge in order to get the minimum 250 orders to get into Quill.  With such a short time left, I'm hoping that more of you who have followed but not order will go ahead and place an order.  I'll continue work on my end to draw in more readers beyond the exiting 283 followers, but with such a short time left it will be quite difficult to draw in enough new people to make up for those who haven't ordered.

              Regardless, as I've said before many ways I will not give up on hitting the goal until this campaign is over, and even if it ends in failure I won't give up on getting this book published though I may have to reassess just how I go about that.    I hope I can reach the goal through Inkshares because I truly believe that this is a publishing model which can lead to a better environment for both readers and writers, but as I'd noted in my previous update with my lack of network and promotional abilities/financing it may turn out that this technique of crowd-sourcing is not one I'm as capable of as I need to be to succeed at Inkshares.  Wherever my path takes me and this series of tales about a strange dwarf and his increasingly strange family, I hope you won't give up on it or me either.

              As for new material, unfortunately we haven't hit the next thresholds(at least 90 preorders and/or 290 followers), so I won't be posting anything new up yet.  I'll post up new sections on the day thresholds are hit from now until the campaign ends.  There's 7 sections of Chapter 6, and section 4 was the last uploaded .  Section 5 will of course be next, with sections 6 & 7 being posted simultaneoulsy at the next threshold after that.  Also, section 1 of Exile, Hunted's 2nd chapter will be posted once we hit 100 preorders for Exile, Magus.  Keep the orders coming in so I can continue to share these stories with you and we can eventually get the full book into your hands.

              Thank you all for your time and support.  Keep reading, enjoying, and have a good remainder of your weekend.
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