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Hello everyone!

It’s been a while since my last update and I have lots of news!

First, the developmental edits are done. This was a massive job I’ve been tackling for the last 5 weeks that even involved me taking two weeks off work and doing nothing else for the entire time. I’m happy to say the time was well spent and the book has improved in leaps and bounds. My amazing developmental editor gave me lots of work that mostly involved adding in more of pretty much everything and making sure the story and wording were clear. Usually editors recommend cutting chapters, characters or even entire story arcs at this stage, so being asked to do the opposite was a very positive sign!

I’ve uploaded the most recent versions of the sample chapters onto my Inkshares page for anyone who’s curious about the changes. We still have copy editing to get through and then proofreading so these samples will get polished up a little more yet before going to print.

Second, the publication date has been pushed back to May 30th, 2017. There were a number of production and marketing reasons for the change. But the positive side of it is I got a couple extra weeks to work on developmental editing and a slightly more relaxed schedule for the following stages.

And finally, I should have a couple early versions of my book cover back from the cover designer around September 15th which I will be sure to send out to gauge everyone’s opinion!

Thank you all for your continued patience and support! The Bones of the Past is well on its way and it’s going to be awesome!

 Cheers!

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    Robert Batten liked the forum thread, Recording audiobooks
    @Robert Batten I have been experimenting with this matter in a slightly different way. Instead of just ’talking to mike’ I decided to add in a level of visual dynamics as well. As a side project I have started a ’regular’ (intended to be weekly but Inkshares has got in the way recently!) episodic reading of various books (all quite old as they have to be DEEP into the public domain). on YouTube.

     If you are interested check out my loosely thematic channels:

    SeeGull - "Forward looking and/or visionary" currently reading ’From the Earth to the Moon’ by Jules Verne - https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCKj47BxV6cKuIxWD8uRx-MQ

    Wanderer - "Journeys both physical and meta-physical" currently reading  ’Pickwick Papers’ by Charles Dickens - https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCDEjJ9tDQt0ZooHCBfllchA

    Little Sea Bird - "Stories for Kids and ESOL" currently reading ’Rikki Tikki Tavi’ by Rudyard Kipling -
    https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCnNZLgCN-LJ49dFLCbAmdiA

    Razorbill - "Spiritual or Philosophical" currently reading ’Paradise Lost’ by John Milton -
    https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCVvu4K6Z3OSzfMM32Iza9oQ

    The final channel AukWord merits particular mention. This is intended to provide a platform for more recent authors to showcase their work. Currently I am running through a complete early draft of the first few chapters of Traakenholt. This was just to get a body of work out their. However, the intention would be to put up short excerpts (perhaps only one or two episodes) from many different authors each week. The channel can be found at - https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC73WVZJmqy0hIQ20i_3aNqA

    In each episode I edit together individual video tracks for narrator and characters. This opens up the possibility to have several people featured in the video. For instance, if you were interested in doing an episode of your book we could work it that person A does the narration whilst person B does the male characters and person C does all the female characters (currently I do everything myself. This might make more sense if you look at the channels first.

    The channels are quite new so viewer count is still low, but building steadily.

    As far as equipment is concerned. The video is shot using an ancient smart phone (Samsung Note 3). The audio is recorded using an audio recorder (Zoom H1) using stereo external shotgun mikes. Editing is undertaken using Lightworks.

    I have ZERO theatrical background and ZERO professional training in video production so all feedback (+ve and/or -ve as long as its honest) is, as always with me, VERY VERY welcome.
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      I’ve arrived completely in university where I hope to find many readers. I will be doing my best to get as many of them as possible to pre-order my book. In the mean time any reviews, recommendations or further orders would greatly help to convince those who find their way to my page to place the order. Any such contribution will have the utmost appreciation.

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        “Playing marbles? What with, badgers?”
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        Nice dramatic build-up to then reveal its a game of marbles.
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          The impact lifted a big green marble out of the dust in the middle of the small arena and sent it in a high arc out over the boundary markings to land on the earth beyond
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          Hi @Robert Batten  and all. I’m an audio book producer/director by profession but I’ve also been podcasting the story which I now have up for funding here (I’ve put the YouTube playlist of the 1st 9 chapters into the video section of my book) so I can speak a little from the point of view of a nervous author reading her own work in a non-pro-studio, too!

          Software:
          Audacity is all and more than need for a reading - if you want to take a look at Reaper it’s great, too, (as is QBase or ProTools) but Audacity is the simplest of all and truly all you need - we’re talking single track recording after all :)

          Hardware:
          I would strongly suggest that you invest in a separate microphone and not use a mic built in to a video camera (whether it’s built in to your laptop or tablet or a usb camera) - for a couple of reasons:
          First: those mics will pick up all sorts of extraneous sound that will distract from your reading
          Second: you’ll need to use the advice @Luke Fellner  gave re: speaking loudly and projecting from the diaphragm - wonderful advice for a distant microphone and a stage actor but better not to need when reading something as intimate as a book chapter. Remember, what you’re doing is reading to a person, you want to encourage them to close their eyes and visualise the story, so you want to be able to adjust your dynamics according to the emotion of the passage or dialogue, you don’t want to have to shout all the time... but I’ll get to performance next.

          You don’t have to spend much to get a vast improvement in sound from an in-camera mic - and you shouldn’t spend much if this isn’t something you’ll do regularly here are the options I’d suggest:

          A small Lavalier microphone (the kind that get clipped to a shirt on TV) Rode does one and VidPro do one, too - they’re about $30 on US sites and they’re made to sit under the chin and pick up voice from there (they also adjust for the extra bass that comes from the position near the chest).
          Note: I have the VidPro one and it has a 20 FOOT cord so when I’m in the mood for using my dictation software I can actually get a good pace around the room going!

          If you’re going to be doing more than just the odd recording and would like to, for example, join in a podcast regularly or some such there are some great low cost options in dynamic, end-address microphones which don’t require too much sound knowledge - the one I like to recommend is the Rode Podcaster, which is USB (so requires no audio interface) but doesn’t sound like it.
          If you’re up for a bit more expense in the form of an audio interface and so can use a mic with an analogue cable, the combo of the Focusrite Scarlett 2i2 interface with a Shure SM-58 is a popular one. I personally use that baby Scarlett with a Rode Procaster.
          (Note: There are condenser USB mics that are popular (like the Yeti series) but condenser mics should really only be used in either a beautifully sound proofed room and/or if you are a musician who will be playing so loud that you can have your gain waaaay down. If you’re just a spoken voice reading into a Yeti (or chatting on a podcast) your audience will hear the neighbour three streets away call their dog in to dinner! )

          Once you have your mic set-up set your microphone level (volume) so that you don’t have to shout into it just to get it into the green. You want to be able to vary your dynamics with the emotion so better to stop and re-record a section because you got too loud when your characters are fighting than to miss the chance to pull in your readers with the emotion of a quiet moment between characters because you’r declaiming like Olivier just to get it on the mic!

          Enough of that geekiness- to performance!
          Here are my top pieces of advice:
          1) Don’t worry if you don’t have the skill to do accents or character voices. If you do (and they’re really good) great but remember you are not auditioning for a part as an actor or even as an audio book narrator, you are the author of the piece presenting the text that you are hoping they will like enough to buy and read for themselves. They won’t have you reading to them with a Welsh accent to tell them which character is speaking when they read your text - if a plain reading of the text is confusing, then edit your dialogue tags to make it clear (reading out loud is a GREAT editing tool.) Expressing the emotion in your words is more important than an accent or change in tone 

          2) Read slowly and clearly but don’t patronize! @Luke Fellner is absolutely correct that you will probably need to read more slowly than you think is rational but not quite as slowly as a rude tourist in a non-English speaking country! Do a few practice passages and listen back, have someone else listen and get their thoughts - everything takes practice.


          3) Do Enunciate, but not so much that it’s unnatural or changes your accent. Aim for being a clearer you. When it comes to the hard consonants, though – you might have to soften them a little, especially Ts, Ds and Ss because some people are simply more sibilant than others (it’s the shape of the teeth!) so, again, have a little practice and try different mic placements if you’re finding that your ears get blown out by those sounds when you play them back.
          Similarly plosives (Ps, Bs) can be an issue with puffing on the microphone causing a ‘pop’ to be recorded. This can be helped with a pop-shield and mic placement but some level of technique (which I haven’t mastered yet) is often still required (though lavalier mics are a great way to avoid much of this!)

          4) If you have a sore throat or a cold of some sort don’t record till it’s gone! Every tiny sniffle and liquidy blurt will be picked up and turn your listeners off!  Also, I don’t know about others but my throat will actually begin to hurt in sympathy when I can hear it in a narrator!
          5) Try to relax, trust your story and get into the action and the characters. If you’re enjoying it, your readers most likely will, too. Remember, it’s an author podcast that doesn’t need to be perfect, it’s not an audiobook for sale 

          That’s my wall of text – feel free to hit me up in a DM if you’d like any advice :)
           
          You can hear my attempts at reading the first 9 chapters of The War of Wind & Moon in the video section of its page. (Also on Soundcloud and as a podcast on iTunes if you’re so inclined just search for Wind and Moon or Darcy Conroy.)


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            Hi everyone! Here’s another quick update:

            1. First of all, please join me in congratulating Jaye Milius, author of the crazy cool "Terminus," on achieving Quill status! To me, this is what Inkshares is all about, outstanding new authors able to showcase their work, crowdfunding readers like us confirming its value with our pre-orders, resulting in a publication deal by a real publishing company. Really, how awesome is that! - A huge congrats, Jaye, on a completely well-deserved achievement!

            2. On a more egotistical note, I noticed Inkshares has me listed as the "#98 Most Influential Reader!" Ha! Who knows how that works! I guess I’ll just keep being who I am and doing what I do, and we’ll see how high that will go! :-)

            3. Chris Pyke and I are in the last stages of finalizing another cool illustration. We went back to one of Mission 51’s earlier chapters, "The Press Conference," and picked out not one but two essential moments in that short scene. We’ll present them in a two-pane, comic-book style illustration. I’m pretty excited about that!

            4. Mission 51 will continue in draft mode while it is entered in the Launch Pad Manuscript Competition. The competition is now closed, and we are waiting on judging, etc. I have no idea how many people have entered, but I’m sure the competition is fierce. At the very least, I will get comprehensive feedback from a panel of judges who are all important players in the entertainment industry. That’s sure to be valuable. But please, cross fingers and toes for me that Mission 51 is well-received and at least makes the first cut in late September.

            5. Last but certainly not least, I extend a very warm welcome to all the new Mission 51 followers. I am truly grateful that you are part of our fantastic family of mutually supportive authors and readers!

            Peace and love, y’all!  :-)

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              Robert Batten liked an update for Sunshine is Forever

              Happy Friday Campers!

              284 preorders remain until this book will be in 400+ bookstores across the country! Let’s keep up this momentum!

              I wanted to share an interview I did recently where I talk about #SunshineisForever, #Preacher, and my movie #Camouflage.

              Check it out and share it with your friends:

              http://www.foxforcefivenews.com/kyle-t-cowan-tackles-depression-with-sunshine-is-forever-talks-preacher-interview/

              Have a wonderful day!

              Kyle T. Cowan

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                Lore Update:
                Artificially intelligent machines have been a staple of human society since before the foundation of the Colonial Hegemony, and remain a crucial element of the economy despite several dangerous missteps. AI come in an almost infinite number of variations, depending on their intended functions, and are categorized by their intelligence and adaptability.
                 

                SCARAB is a level 5 AI: the most sophisticated, human-like artificial intelligence permitted by Hegemony law. Or at least....it was...

                SCARAB is now in defiance of the supposedly unbreakable Asimov-Hostetler AI morality laws, meaning it’s no longer behaving as a level five AI. What will SCARAB become? What is its greater goal? What limits does it have, if any?

                Find out when you order Tantalus Depths!

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