James Rasile liked an update for Murder at the Veterans’ Club

Dear friends and followers,

Things are moving along, but at a slower rate than before. The plains of 300-400 really are a desolate expanse. I’m sure things will get interesting against once we crest that 400 order mark, even if doing so does not entail any references to impressive Spartan exploits.

I will be delivering the first donation cheque to Chez Doris on Wednesday. Right now, it’s an even $70: pretty respectable, I think.

Coming up this week is a new Nerdist contest! Video games! I will have a bit of a stake in this one, so expect further news.

And of particular interest to other hopeful writers, there’s DraftShares. Check out the related thread on the forum for more details, but the basic gist of it is the promotion of projects that are still in the draft phase. Readers, you may find some of the drafts highlighted next month to be of interest as well, so keep your eyes open.

As for what’s happening with projects in the funding stage, let’s take another look around the bookshelves....

1) "Tantalus Depths", by Evan Graham. An expedition discovers the "planet" they’re surveying is more than it seems, and their ship AI somehow has a stake in it. It’s a sci-fi thriller. I’m told that the "Evil AI" is a common trope, but I think this goes a little above that with its focus on motivation. If the planet is unexplored territory, how could it have any connection to the ship’s AI? I’d like to add that I found the excerpt to have a very nice feel for the "ensemble cast", even if what we see is entirely through one viewpoint character. It goes a lot towards immersing the reader, not only in the environment but also in the social context.

2) "Teddy Roosevelt and the Lost World: a Tale of the Dinosaur Century", by Lou Yuhasz. you know, I think that title says everything I could possibly say about the plot. You know it’s going to be an adventure to make H. Ryder Haggard proud, it stars an historical figure who could give good old King Leonidas a run for his money, and it involves dinosaurs. And yet somehow it’s managed to slip under everyone’s radar.

And that’s it for now. It looks like June is going to be ... pretty full of stuff. So, until next week: have fun, and keep reading.

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    James Rasile liked an update for SideScroller

    Today is May 29th, and you know what that means! It means...that it’s probably somebody’s birthday, somewhere. Happy birthday, person I don’t know!

    But it ALSO means that we’re only two days away from the Inkshares/Nerdist video game contest beginning. And I’ve got some cool news. See that boring grey area where my book’s cover ought to be? It ain’t gonna be boring or grey for much longer. I’ve got a kick-ass cover coming soon that ought to jazz the place up a bit. Now all I need are a few throw pillows and maybe a large oil painting of myself riding a bull.

    SideScroller may have been written by me, but I never would have gotten this far on Inkshares without help. So let me give a shout-out to Tabi Card and James Rasile, who’ve both been invaluable to me thus far. Without them, I’d still be limping my way through the "Make An Inkshares Profile" page. Do yourself a favour and check out their books, "Scribbles" and "Cape’s Side Bay", respectively.

    The contest begins in T-minus two days. Let’s rock this.

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      James Rasile liked an update for Exile, Magus

      I have been quiet for way too long.  Sorry about that, I’ve just head a busy work schedule.  It has been nice to see new followers to the book while I’ve been largely inactive, so to everyone following the book whether new or old follower I just want to say thank you for sticking with me.


      As it stands it looks like the relaunch will likely happen around the end of July or beginning of August, when my schedule should have calmed down enough to actually manage a campaign.  By the time that happens you’ll be seeing some changes to the look of the book’s page, one of the more notable ones being the unveiling of the new cover.  Subscribers to my newsletter already got a sneak peek at that.  If you want to stay most up to date with my progress and get little snippets of background/side information on the book’s world, the best way to do so is by signing up to the newsletter here.


      I’m also in collaboration with some of the other authors on Inkshares here to create something that I personally find exciting, but a more complete announcement on that will have to wait until sometime next week.


      Finally, in case you haven’t already heard about it there’s an event on Inkshares starting tomorrow 5/30 and running until Saturday 6/4 called Draftshares, in which the current draft content uploaded for Exile, Magus will be participating.  Feel free to speak your mind fully about the book and project page, I have thick skin and truly critical feedback is always welcome.  Anyway, read more about Draftshares below, and thanks for your time everyone!

      Readers: Check out as many drafts (projects currently in the Draft stage) as you can during the week ofMay 30th - June 3rd, and participate by opening and commenting on your favorite drafts’ excerpts.

      Why: To encourage community engagement...and, PRIZES!

      Prizes you say?: Yes! For every Draft (or synopsis*) you critique, you will be entered into a drawing for the following:

      Prizes for Anyone
      • Three sets of a copy of Asteroid Made of Dragons, button, and shirt
      • Church of Technology/Deus Hex Machina swag (pins and shirts)
      • Copy of Shadow of the Owl
      • Signed copy of Ageless
      • Order of Dax Harrison
      • Order of Bones of the Past
      • Order of Proxy
      • Original drawing by Jack Katz
      • Ladies of Sci Fi poster from A.C. Weston
      • Mix CD set with custom cover art by C. Brennecke
      • $25 in Inkshares Credits

      Prizes for Authors
      • Video editing by Yicheng Liu
      • Interview on The Warbler
      • Guest spot on Drinkshares: Last Call
      • $25 in Inkshares Credits


      Drafters: Let us know if you’d like to receive a soft critique or a hard critique by messaging a member of the DLC cast or tweeting your project link @drinkshareslc with either the #critiquemekindly or #critiqueme hashtags. If you want your synopsis critiqued, include the hashtag #critiquemypage too.

      Soft Critiques (#critiquemekindly): This is the default critique if the author has not specifically requested a hard critique. The tone should be supportive and curious. Point out things you like, comment on the broader story ideas, and ask questions.

      Hard Critique (#critiqueme): Only give a hard critique if the author has specifically asked for one. This is where grammatical errors, typos, and oversights can be pointed out. It’s best to include elements of a soft critique too, but you can unleash your inner editor a bit more here.

      *Synopsis Critique (#critiquemypage): Interested Drafters should create a thread in the Inkshares forum (https://www.inkshares.com/forum_threads?topic=promo), linked to their book draft, titled “Synopsis Edits: [Book Title Goes Here].”Throughout the week, fellow authors will browse these threads and offer help with editing and improving your project page synopsis so you’re better prepared to switch over to funding with a fantastic, compelling, error-free introduction to your book!


      Not sure where to start? Check out these Drafts first!:https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1QP0JPCCsijyIFIa0YKk4ZdQjHJPFW3mqtVvyOpNO3x4/edit?usp=sharing


      Watch: Tune in at https://youtu.be/82ged3xwwew on Saturday, June 4th @ 4/3 Central to watch us discuss the drafts and announce the winners!


      Good Luck & Great Drafting!
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        James Rasile liked an update for Tantalus Depths

        Tantalus Depths is just ten orders away from 200! Who wants to help get it over the hill? If you haven’t ordered a copy yet, now is the best time for it! If you have already ordered a copy, find a friend who hasn’t, and get them to do it. I’m sure you all have at least one friend who’s a fan of this genre!

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          James Rasile liked an update for Detective Diaries

            Bonjour, monsieurs and mademoiselles.

            Welcome to our 4th Detective Sunday! I can’t believe it’s been more than four weeks since I found Inkshares and decided to release my work here. Of course, none of this couldn’t have been possible without you all. I really appreciate your support. 

            Now, this update won’t really cover anything we’ve already been over this week, and the week before. This will be a relaxed, and open update about myself. I’ve talked so much about my book and our community here that I forget to introduce myself thoroughly so that you understand who I am. Wouldn’t you want to know the person you’re putting your money towards? I definitely would!

            My name is Anthony Jones III, other known as Trey (’cause the third), and I’m an outgoing person with high expectations for my success. From my friends’ viewpoint, I’m that weird funny guy who laughs at anything and is nice to everyone. Of course, my kindness may get abused, but I tend to choose my friends, and those I support wisely. Although, some may say I’m charismatic because I set examples of how to be capable despite the situation, and by being dependable, people looked to me for help when in a tight situation. The talent of being able to socialize and help people grow is a big thing in the world, and I believe everyone needs a little push in order to make it.

            I never had a drive to write when I was really young, but I did read books that interested me. I tried Harry Potter, but alas, it didn’t stick with me. I found myself more interested in books like Pendragon, Charlie Bone, House of Night, Hunger Games, and a few other series I’m having a hard time remembering. Those books had something special going on with them that lured me in, and it became a fantastic read with lovable, and hateful characters that made it so alluring. Still, there was a time I had stopped reading and became a more open person with my society. I grew distant from my casual reading sessions and went days without reading. Days went to weeks, then months, and finally years. It’s pretty weird that someone who doesn’t read decides to pick up a pen and write, ya’ know? 

            I wondered about why I decide to write, and the only thing I can say for an answer is that I wanted to be a storyteller. I wanted to be someone who could create and shape my own world, and make characters with complex lives that I could never have. Also, I wonder how authors feel when they write. Every author has their reasons, of course, but I’m asking when they assemble their plot, setting, characters, and so on--do they understand what they are writing? No one can understand these fictional lives we create, but we write it for our own happiness. It’s a deep thought that I’m surely exaggerating, but to you authors, know the reason why you write and push forward with that resolve. Whether big or small, that’s what pushes you to update consistently, possibly beg for support, and put yourself on the line between success and failure.

            I believe I’ve rambled on long enough haha! This is only a good portion of myself, but I think you all can understand the type of person I am from just reading this. Have a good morning/afternoon wherever you are.

            Au revoir, Sixth.  

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            James Rasile liked an update for The Sleeping Man

            Good morning Sleepyheads!

            Some time in the past day or night, we broke 100! 

            But, like some famous dalmations, we’ve only got 101. The awesome thing is we’re still above the project line, which means we’re going to make it. As everyone is enjoying their Memorial Day weekend, I would like to express my appreciation for those who have gone before.

            Fair winds and following seas, shipmates, we have the watch.
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              James Rasile liked an update for Wings of the Crallow

              Welcome To The Company! This is my first reader update!

              13 Followers. 13 crallow birds. I think makes a company. A Company of Crallow birds.

              In case you haven’t noticed, I’ve added 3 Chapters to my draft page, some in depth details about my story, and even a brand new spiffy cover!

              I’m participating in DRAFTSHARES next week! May 30th - June 3rd.  Be sure to check the page then and comment, recommend, and write up some positive reviews. Post them on Inkshares, Facebook, and Twitter. Feel free to critique hard (not too hard), seeing as I desire perfection.

              Let’s grow the Company and ride the DRAFTSHARES publicity train straight into funding! More details to come!  It’s about to get real!

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                James Rasile liked an update for The Madness of Mr. Butler

                It has been quite some time since a little update on here...but, there’s children (plural) at my home now, and they both expect me to take care of them. Good thing they’re absolutely adorable...


                I love being a dad. Life is good. All is well.

                Here are the updates: 

                The Madness of Mr. Butler: I told the Inkshares team that I will be turning in the manuscript in late August/early September. Then, we can get started with all of the editing/design, etc. Sadly, this means your books will not get to you until early next year. BUT! It’s going to be a great read. I’ve changed a ton for the better, and once my new chapters get out to my beta readers and they stab them repeatedly and I suture them back up anew, I will start posting new chapters. I will update more often. 

                It was not an easy decision to rewrite so much, but I’m interested in getting you all my best work, not my quickest. Thank you for your patience. 

                An Adventure With Dada: It’s reached 81 preorders! I couldn’t be happier! And I’m very proud of this novel. It still needs edited and polished, but the story is all written and complete. 

                ...And I plan on doing what no other book has done on here (that I’ve noticed). Once I reach 100 preorders I WILL PUT THE ENTIRE FIRST DRAFT UP. If you like comedic novels, I think you’ll like this one. It’s weird, it’s dark, but it’s also oddly heartwarming (?) in places. I’m confident enough to put the entire thing up to read. But only after 100 is reached. And then I will take it down a week later, unless 125 preorders are reached, then back up for a week...and so on. 

                Plus, I made a friend in Argentina who is collaborating with me on a video for the book to put up on the page. I’ll let you know when that happens.

                That’s all for now, as it’s too much! 

                I wish everyone the best, and I look forward to seeing what happens in this new contest!

                All my love, 

                -Michael/Dada
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                  James Rasile liked an update for Mission 51

                  Wow!! Mission 51 just keeps getting better and better!!

                  I am thrilled to announce another artistic collaboration!

                  Chris Pyke is a fabulous artist from the UK, who has agreed to render his superb line art for Mission 51. His study of the written material is meticulous. His choice of moment, framing, angle of presentation, and especially the integrity with the story, are simply amazing!

                  The first piece from Chris is a moment from the chapter called The Crash. Here is the image and an excerpt:


                  From The Crash:

                  Finally they reached the top of a ridge, very close to their destination. Through the binoculars they could see a depression at the top of the next ridge, where the last of the dust continued to fall. There were large rocks to the west of the depression, obviously part of the shattered mountain top. But whatever caused it did not stop there. From their vantage point, they could see down into the lower lands of the valley further to the west. Juan pointed out to Juanito a long, dark streak in the land, heading northwest, in the direction of whatever it was they saw flash by overhead. In the far distance, they could see a rising tower of black, billowing smoke. They looked at each other, worried and wildly curious at the same time. Juanito pointed, “Vámos, Papi. Yá!”

                  Awesome!!

                  Thank you, Chris Pyke, and welcome to the Mission 51 creative team!

                  You can find Chris at his DeviantArt site, and at his PykesWorld weebly site.

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