I’ve added a flashback chapter. These will be spaced through the novel (though their placement is still a bit fluid), giving us some insight into Leaf’s background. I’m hoping these enhance and deepen Leaf’s story; what do you all think?
We were told it was man that was cast out of the garden of Eden. As mankind hurtles into the 20th Century, an ancient secret surfaces that will change the course of history. It is a tale about mankind reclaiming its destiny by learning of its past.
In the palaces of Brilliance, the fear of death is a distant memory. When a young heir discovers the rotten truths behind her ideal nation, she must choose between justice and order.