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It’s more about what you expect your posted chapters (or excerpts) to do for you. Ideally, you want convey a sense of how your story goes, who your characters are, and what you can deliver as a writer with as few uploads as possible: I believe that most readers aren’t interested in going much beyond the first chapter upload. No-one wants to get too deeply engaged with something they can’t finish until two years afterward.

So: your first chapter/excerpt is your most important, the one with the best polish. Everything beyond that is gravy.

Kyle James’s "Not Afraid of the Fall" did quite well by uploading one excerpt (not a whole chapter) with a complete scene, and then several very short excerpts, some only about a paragraph long. That story was a travel memoir, so the one scene in his primary excerpt gave a good idea of what he had to offer, while the subsequent excerpts gave an idea of variety.

For myself, I had a murder mystery. So I uploaded everything up to the murder, but the "primary upload" was a prologue designed to whet the appetite.
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    Oh wow - we’re at just under two weeks left to the deadline, and 212 of 250 orders reached - so only 38 to go! You are all amazing and I am so excited, and I know we can get there - if you can order one or two more, or send it along to friends or family, please please do; we’re so close!

    Also, as thanks, here is a piece of chapter four, as a preview:

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    The final hazard was a dragon.

    Oliver, flattened against a canyon wall, hissed, “Did you expect this?”

    “No!” Tir peeked around rock again. “That’s new. Not in any of my books.”

    “I thought they were extinct!”

    “Not at all. They don’t come across the border, though. They live on magic. Oh—of course, this is your Seeing Pool, it’s entirely magic…I wonder if it drinks from the Pool itself, or—”

    “You can practice comparative magical zoology later!” He risked one more glance. The Pool itself was visible beyond the not insignificant obstacle of dragon. It formed a natural spring, welling up into a bowl shaped of smoky transparent stone, carved over eons by the drip of Fairyland-sourced water. It shimmered under the slate-and-cloud sky at the end of the skinny rock-walled trail. It lay only a few steps distant, but: dragon.

    Not a cuddly faithful tamable beast as in some children’s puppet shows. Not huge, about the size of a big cart-horse, but absolutely not small as a house-pet lizard. Ugly. Black-scaled, spiky, fanged. Ochre glow down near its belly. Built to be a predator and bring death. It lashed its tail like a vicious cat, waiting. It knew they’d come.

    Tir gave him a mildly annoyed glare. “If anything I’d be a writer of magical romance, and it’s research—”

    “I know that!”

    “Give me your sword, then.”

    Oliver passed it over, no questions asked. It was a good sword; no fancy name or lineage, just plain strong steel and solid craftsmanship.

    Tir closed a hand around the blade, not the hilt. Oliver almost interrupted right then, but no blood appeared; he kept an eye on Tir’s fingers, though. He’d grown up with legends about magic and the cost thereof.

    Tir murmured low words and stroked his hand along bare steel, a disarmingly intimate gesture. Oliver might’ve been imagining the way the sword thrilled to his caress, a ripple passing along the surface. Might’ve been.

    He had a flash of astonished wondering: was this how Tir would touch someone he loved? With strength, with coaxing, with unhurried deliberate fingers and palm?

    He swallowed. He tried not to think about whether magic always moved like this for Tir: a slow sweet seduction, a pulse-beat, a swell of desire.

    Everyone knew the Crown Prince’s loyal companion was a fairy. Oliver had never seen his best friend as a fairy before.

    Tir blinked, shook himself, came back from whatever dreamy precipice he’d been on. “Here.”

    “Was it good for you,” Oliver tossed back, a joke in the face of strange uneasiness. Tir’s hand stroking his sword, Tirian beautiful and inhuman and wrapped in invisible sorcery. The teasing landed badly.

    “I put myself into it,” Tir said. No perceptible reaction to his failed joke-attempt. Only sincerity and practical focus, which of course should be the case, in the face of a dragon. “My own magic. It should work.”

    “You could use it. Um. If it’s…yours?”

    “You’re better with a sword than I am, and it’s your Quest.” Tir shoved the sword into his hand and pulled both long knives instead. “I don’t know if it’ll work. I’ll be your distraction. Just try to cut its head off; there’s no such thing as a mythical vulnerable spot. Ready?”

    “No,” Oliver said. “Are you okay? I mean…I don’t know. Are you?”

    And Tir’s eyes got less guarded, more affectionate, more familiar. “I’m fine.”

    They ran into battle—for the first time ever—together. The world transformed. Became a crazy collision of black scales and lunges and scorching fire. Oliver had indeed trained with a sword, but never against a horse-sized heap of fangs and claws and spiked tail; he ducked, dodged, felt the sharp sudden sting of a tail-barb scrape one leg. A flicker of blue flowed past him: Tir, he realized belatedly, turning rock-dust into sparkling motes of magic, calling a Fairyland-beast to him.

    He stumbled on a rock; the dragon’s head swung his way and snarled. Fire bubbled up: not ready yet but building. Tir threw a knife instead of magic this time. It whirled back to face him.

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      Happy New Year!

      Farewell to 2016, which saw the publication of It’s All Fun and Games by Inkshares, and welcome to 2017, during which I’m hoping for a repeat.  Yes, the sequel folks have been asking for is not only in progress, but in editing mode!  You can find the More Fun and Games project page here.  I will be posting draft chapters as I go, so you’ll be able to get a glimpse of the continuation of Allison’s, TJ’s, Stu’s, Chuck’s, and Jimmy’s story.  I wrote this novel during NaNoWriMo in 2011 and it’s been sitting ever since, and I’m getting a real kick out of "reading" it as I go.

      A quick note about the Inkshares funding model.  The pricing has changed so that $10 will get you an ebook and $20 will get you an autographed physical copy.  This is a significant uptick from the first go-round, and will make achieving the funding goal here trickier.  I’m not at the point where I’m ready to start the pre-ordering, but if you happen to be interested in helping fund the sequel, please head on over and "Follow" the project.  That will give me a good sense as to what the actual funding for the sequel may look like.  I’ll be sure to post any updates over there on the IAFAG page so you won’t miss out on any info even if you’re not quite ready to commit.

      FREE STUFF FREE STUFF FREE STUFF

      Now I’ve also got some other news to share.  A group of us indie authors are joining together in new-year’s giveaway for the next couple weeks or so.  Most of the books are in the "Fantasy Comedy" domain, and some aren’t especially kid-friendly, but they’re a bunch of good reads.

      Here are the covers of the books that are being given away!

      The update mechanism isn’t the easiest thing to finagle here on Inkshares, so rather than trying to make this look pretty and create links and photos and the like, I’m just going to link you to a page with all the freebies listed.  Give them a look! 

      FREE STUFF FREE STUFF FREE STUFF

      Feel free to share the links with people, including the link to my own novel.  The first 5 chapters (up to the fateful arrow strike, for those of you who have read it) are free for the downloading to anyone who wants them.

      As always, I thank you for all your support, and I look forward to bring you More Fun and Games in 2017!

      Cheers
      Dave


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        Happy 2017 to all of my supportive followers out there!

        I have a few exciting developments regarding The Walls are Closing In.

        News headlines in recent weeks have provided no shortage of headaches, but also no shortage of ideas, and several new scenes have been added to a manuscript that I had originally thought was, for the most part, complete. 

        My husband, Artist Bart Castle, has worked up the national emblem that will be ever so prominent throughout the story. A new version of the map has also been uploaded to the book’s page.

        The official pre-order campaign will begin next Friday, the 13th, and will run for three months. I am going to throw myself into this campaign completely, and am aiming for the gold, 750 pre-orders and a full publishing contract, which will place The Walls are Closing In on bookstore shelves across the country. Ideas from my fellow authors, friends, family, and followers are more than welcome!

        Conversations are in the works regarding blog interviews and You-Tube channel features. Stay tuned.

        The book has received several new reviews and recommendations, and for that I am incredibly grateful. I will share a selection of them here in closing.











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          Dear friends and followers,

          Happy new year! By now, you should all have gotten the news that we’ve made our goal, a month early. Or, more precisely, that we’ve made the top three on The List, which means the same result without having to actually hit the full 750 orders. This is pretty awesome, and it’s all thanks to you. Every one of you who pre-ordered, who spread the word, who got your friends to pre-order or even just to look at the book: thank you. Thank you so much.

          So, now that we’re "in production", what does that mean? When will you get your books?

          I know I’ve been saying that books will probably be out around November 2017, and that was a conservative estimate back in March when I started. But the volume of books going through Inkshares of late means that the production process is longer now than it used to be. Here is what Inkshares has to say about the production process. According to this, it could be twelve to eighteen months from the moment I submit my manuscript before the book comes out. In short: between January and June 2018.

          I know. I’m a little dismayed too. But it’s still miles better than not getting it out at all, so it’s still a cause for celebration.

          Again, thank you for everything. Let’s party like it’s 1925!

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            My heartfelt congratulations to the winners of Inkshares’ first-ever The List contest! @James Rasile for Cape’s Side Bay, @Christopher Huang for Murder at the Veterans’ Club, and @Matt Harry for Sorcery for Beginners. Awesome books! Well-deserved!! Wow!!! :D

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              Hi, everyone!

              Just a quick reminder that this is the LAST day of Inkshares’ The List contest! It’s my last chance to get a full publishing deal, so if you haven’t ordered yet or have someone you’ve been nagging to order, today’s the day!

              Thanks so much for your support this year. I’m so grateful for everyone who’s supported my project. There’s an awful lot of this that I didn’t expect would happen: that people who weren’t obligated to be nice would like my work, that I’d end up in the running for two different contests, or that I’d manage to sell 250 copies to people who weren’t my mom. So thank you for making my dream come true! I’m thrilled to get to bring you my book.

              Happy New Year!

              Maggie

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                Happy New Year, Knightmares!

                I wanted to send out a quick message before the New Year to update you on what’s going on. So here’s the update: Inkshares has quite a bit of backlog going on right now with books waiting to be published. This log-jam, I am hoping, will get some clarity sometime within the first few weeks of the year. 

                That’s really the entirety of it. I am waiting my turn while I work on other projects, both artistic and written.  If you have a chance, check out Vexed or Masked, both new projects listed here on Inkshares.

                In the meantime, I wanted to wish all of you a very happy close to 2016, and a very prosperous and exciting 2017! 

                Thanks again for all your support! And remember, the book is still on sale, so if you haven’t yet, grab a copy!


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                  Well, 2016 is on its deathbed.  Appropriate analogy all things considered.  We’ve said goodbye to many this year, although to be honest the famous deaths of this year didn’t really register in my ecosystem until the very end.  Seeing as I don’t remember a world that didn’t have Princess Leia or Singing in the Rain in it, I definitely felt something when those two passed.  To have them do so within days of my grandmother passing away definitely put a more subdued end on a year filled with frustration and stress.  That said, there were some things I enjoyed about this year.  Here are some highlights.

                  • Highlight moment of the year: Holding my very own book in my hands for the first time on Sept 13.
                  • Highlight moment runner-ups: 15th wedding anniversary (such a fun evening Michelle), Finishing the manuscript for Fall on Jan 18, appearing on the Current Geek podcast with Scott Johnson (I’ve been listening to him since 2009; yeah that mattered); winning two more contests on Inkshares; Publishers Weekly review; Audible book deals for Rise and Fall
                  • Best Movie: Toss-up between Civil War and Rogue One for me. honorable mention to Zootopia
                  • Best TV Series (started this year): Toss up here between Stranger Things and Orphan Black. Honorable mention to the new Muppets and Voltron
                  • Best Book I read: not touching that with a 39-and-a-half-foot pole.  Too many friends published books this year.  So instead:
                  1. Most Surprising Book: Unattractive Vampire (did not see myself enjoying this)
                  2. Most Difficult to read: tie between Ageless and Rune of the Apprentice for entirely different reasons (Note: I still enjoyed them ;-))
                  3. Most Inspiring: Push
                  • Best Game played: I’d have to say Munchkin (adventure time or Cthulu versions); yes I hadn’t played it before
                  • Best Video Game played: I spend a lot of time in Civilization VI so that is a good answer.  Stellaris is another really good one.  That said, I think I’ll choose Crashlands.  My daughter and I have spent hours playing concurrent games (no multi-player) throughout this year
                  • Highlight Verse I read: Psalm 27:14 - Wait for the LORD; be strong, and let your heart take courage; wait for the LORD! (ESV)

                   So, yeah it’s been an interesting year.  Rounding out the year watching the entire Harry Potter series with my daughter was another moment, including giving her book one in both German and English for Christmas.  I’m so proud of her development as a linguist.  Watching her interact with those in need on Christmas Eve, seeing the smiles on their faces when she spoke with them.  It warmed the heart.

                  2017.

                  Looking straight at you now.  What’s coming?  Well, I don’t know.  2016 definitely did not go according to plan (except the release of Rise.  That did happen as planned.)  So, who knows what will happen but here’s what I intend on doing.

                  1. By the end of 2017, the first drafts of Shatter and Unite will be done.  
                  2. I will be able to lead discussions and do live translations without fear in Arabic.  
                  3. And I’ll be able to hold my own in a conversation in German.

                  Onward!

                  “Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow.” – Ronald E. Osborn

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