Scott Carss commented on an excerpt of The Vatheran Prologue
I’m going to "sever" the head of the kreeper.
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    I’m going to severe the head of the Kreeper
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    Scott Carss commented on an excerpt of The Vatheran Prologue
    I would put it but may I ask what you are going to do? It just sounds better.
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      “Yes sir, but may I ask what are you going to do?” Amund called back.
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      Scott Carss commented on an excerpt of The Vatheran Prologue
      Remove the and from the sentence and it makes more sense. The machine guns or firing as the kreeper climb the wall otherwise you need a third thing that’s happening as the machine guns fire and the kreeper climb.
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        As the Kreeper climbed the wall in hordes, and the machine guns fired at the vertical limit firing at ninety-degrees, killing hundreds and yet still they climbed.
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