Synopsis Edits: Sundowning

Created over 2 years ago by J. Danielle Dorn with 2 comments
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Dsc00487   copy Craig A. Munro · Author · added over 2 years ago
As far as the synopsis goes I think it’s excellent with the exception of the second paragraph - Giving everyone’s age just feels awkward to read and clunky.

I’m really liking the premise and I’ll dig into the draft later today.
0925161337 J. Danielle Dorn · Author · edited over 2 years ago · 1 like
Looking for hard critique of plot, tone, and character development in the early stages of the draft’s life.