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Created about 3 years ago by Sam with 3 comments
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Hanz profile Sam · Author · added about 3 years ago
Thanks, I really appreciate it! I was somewhat in a rush to get more info out there, but I shall be sure too look over the rest.
Close up A.C. Weston · Author · edited about 3 years ago · 1 like
Hi Sam! I decided to toss out a quick edit of the first section of your synopsis in the hopes of giving a general idea of how it could be improved. I think it’s a good idea to take everything you post, from excerpts to synopsis, through several editing passes before you put them out there.

Good luck!


About the book:

Lilith: Singularity follows the journey of Lilith to return Humans to the top of the pecking order, and also the journey of a Sin.

As Lilith begins to learn more about the true past of Humanity’s ancestors, she’ll begin to question whether she should continue... or if humanity should be left to extinction. At the same time, a Sin will come to the realization that their own ancestors might have been wrong—but it what way?

A lot of moral choices will occur, and not all of them will be black or white.

With this book I am hoping to delve not only into the psyche of people, but also of A.I. when they deal with problems and scenarios with no clear, correct decisions or outcomes.

Hanz profile Sam · Author · edited about 3 years ago
Hey guys, so I just set up my first campaign for the Geek & Sundry contest—though I’m not too bothered if I don’t win. But I was wondering if there is any details I missed out that I should probably add in to the about section? Also, if you want to give the chapter a read itself I’d love that too!