Military sci-fi is something that I think is a little hard to find, which is a real shame. I'm definitely excited for this - and if this is your thing, you will be too! Check it out, this draft is looking pretty good.

great beginning

Interesting concept, yet with the small section available, one can already tell this is going to be a great story. A calculated nuclear winter will create compelling conflict for the characters to deal with and I look forward to reading that with the author's imagery. I like what I've read so far, and I look forward to reading more.

Smooth storytelling, the word choice and structure make it easy to digest everything available to read.