My friend and loyal reader Chris M raised a few great questions about the early chapters, so I went back and did some work there.  Which led to more work everywhere.  All revisions are posted, but don’t feel you need to start over from the beginning.  That’s for hardcore readers only.  Like my Mom.

And I’ve been moving forward.  If you’ve been reading along, you should be up to Chapter 11.  And now you can read through Chapter 15.  You may hit some rough patches here and there in the later chapters.  After I get to the end, I’ll go back and smooth things out.  

What’s left?  Three more chapters.  That need some serious work.  Including a missing final paragraph.  The search for that continues.

Meanwhile, thanks for reading.  And let me know how you like it.

Anne