Dec 6, 2015
I've posted Chapter 8, which may give you a bit of deja-vu. Faith A, who wrote the delightful "A Cup for the Dead" (first chapter on Inkshares!), had some great suggestions for cuts and rewrites to Chapter 2 -- which I did, as well as move a paragraph from there to Chapter 8. So if you run into it, it's not a repeat. It's a relo.
Thanks for reading.
Anne