Discussion

Kirsty L Jennings · Author · added about 8 years ago
They are both within the same world, but at this stage anything can change :)
Mike Donald · Author · added about 8 years ago
I would run with THE  DREAM CATCHERS idea...but I’m film orientated.:)
Kirsty L Jennings · Author · added about 8 years ago

Thank you for the insightful feedback. As it is at the moment, it is only an idea as I have been focussing on my other three books. But I will certainly take what you have said and implement it. I did begin with a thought that The Dreamers could somehow, in their dream state, manage to manipulate certain things in their dreams and it also changes something in reality, either for themselves or for a certain cause, who knows. And then I invented The Dream Catchers, sort of like a police force, to catch them. I just thought of the idea whilst I was in fact writing on my other books :)

Mike Donald · Author · added about 8 years ago
Love the idea, but perhaps you need to bring some more clarity to the pitch?  To dream a whole new world is at odds with the idea of manipulating and controlling thoughts...if they dream it doesn’t effect us...if they get everybody to see an imaginary world then they have to control billions of thought processes....it feels like you need combine your idea into one strong thought...if they could control everybodies dreams...and have them living in a lucid  dream...then that would be more focussed...then you can have someone mess it up...a teenage insomniac who has to convince everybody they are in a lucid dream and only he can see the planet as it really is...sort of Nightmare on Elm street meets Inception...best idea of the four you have IMHO