Glenn McDougall's latest update for Slice: A Story of Awfulness and Depravity

Mar 21, 2016

Hi there Slicers! I’ve just baptised you with a collective noun! I hope you’re all well and groovy this spring? I’m messaging purely to share this review which, as well as containing solid criticism, made me hoot with joy like a hungry baby in a room covered with nipples...


 DANIELLE DORN



I laughed. I cried. I threw up in my mouth a little bit.It fulfills, in my opinion, the basic definition of the word "obscene," but for the fact that it possesses artistic value. The characters have a certain deranged charm about them, the subversion (perversion?) of the superhero origin story is refreshing, and there are several relatable observations on the human condition that I was not expecting from an excerpt containing so many bodily fluids and references to, pardon my French, toaster fucking.Although: there are way too many adverbs in this draft. The road to Hell is paved with adverbs.

Wasn’t that lovely?

Glenn x 
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