Instead of professional detectives, these are amateurs? This could prove to be very entertaining!

I love your writing style, and the world you describe sounds fascinating!  I also love the idea of not simply writing a dystopian post-apocalyptic science fiction novel, but taking a noir detective story and placing it in the middle of that setting.  Very innovative.  I can't wait to see this project develop.  Great job!

This sounds fascinating. It is not simply a dystopian post-apocalyptic science fiction novel, but a fun noir detective story placed in the middle of that setting. I can't wait to see this project develop!

Amidst a dystopian future, with vivid imagery and well thought out world-building, blending genres and allusions. This is one project I am looking forward to see where it goes

A good and weird story overall. I greatly appreciate the unique and weird. This is one of them