Clash with the Immortals. Recidivism, seems like a project worth supporting.

This premise is so original and intriguing. The voice is strong and the narration well-written.

This sounded right up my alley - intriguing and dark - and the first chapter promises that and more.

This premise is so original and intriguing. The voice is strong and the narration well-written.

A premise well worth exploring and writing that is clean and flows easily. I'm looking forward to more!

Wow! Chapter One, Passing Time, was impressive. Excellent development of Jonna's character, the jailhouse scene, and a dark, heavy mood. Evocative. I'm hungry for more!