Yarry Gonzalez's latest update for Pariah Legion: Spyder’s Tale

Jun 22, 2015

Hello all,

I have finished my initial editing pass, and am now ready to send the book out to Alpha Readers!  As an Alpha Reader, you will be volunteering to get an early draft of the story and offer your services as an unpaid editor.  I will take your feedback, criticism and praise all at once, then return to the book to make what changes and improvements are needed.

If you are interested in becoming an Alpha Reader, please contact me at 'yarry23@gmail.com' in the next few coming days.  The book weighed in at just under 134k words, and should be a pretty fast paced read.  I am also looking for feedback on whether you, as readers, prefer shorter, smaller chapters, but lots of them, or fewer, lengthier chapters.  As originally written, the book had 37 chapters.  Regrouping them I could do it in 14.  Opinions?

I will try to send out the current rough draft to Alpha Readers by the end of this week.  Thank you ahead of time to everyone that considers volunteering for such an effort!

Talk soon,

~~yarry