Jan 29, 2016

Hey guys,

I just wanted to let you know that I have started completely rewriting this story. I have some people reading through my first draft and ripping it to shreds which is very helpful so that I know what I need to fix to make my story better. The chapters are still mostly going to be the same just with more detail of their surroundings and their emotions. Please read the introduction chapters that I have right now and let me know what you think so that I know where I need to improve the new chapters.  

Thank you!