Feb 24, 2017

Hello Detectives,

It is time for Detective Diaries to get a proper remodeling. This remodeling will start with the deletion of the current chapters. As I said before, I would like to change important events, or rather swap them around to benefit the ominous presence of the Bone Breaker, Rochester, and Ouroboros. Each plays a role, but I didn’t necessarily know how to flesh them out, or place them correctly because there’s so much to be discussed. The main characters have their own backstories alongside Amani Marshall, but I became so involved with the other characters that I deviated from the center point. I believe the best way to handle this is to carry on with portraying Amani’s story of discovering who the Bone Breaker is, but eliminating the whole entire situation of her being underneath Carbine and helping him with his own investigation; however, at the same time, I will bring in other characters into the mix and maybe show a sliver of their own problems, for they could tie into her own down the line.

Good news is--as I type this letter to you all, I am preparing for the first chapter. Now, there are some scenes I am keeping because plot, but expect some new scenes and the absence of those you read before. Also, I won’t say a specific date to expect this chapter until it’s concrete. That is all for now. I hope you all are well and good luck with whatever you’re pursuing in life.

Sincerely,

Anthony Jones III