May 22, 2016

I looked over my segment from Chapter Two and decided it was much weaker than I wanted, so I put it in the context of the whole chapter.  I would love for everyone to take a gander at the prose.  I think it’s great, but I may be biased :D

https://www.inkshares.com/books/borehole-bazaar-a-vow-unbroken?recommended=true