Update for A Distant State

Aug 21, 2015

I want to thank everyone that has followed A Distant State.

So just over a day going live with A Distant State. I've been busy behind the scenes. I've working on editing chapter 2, re-reading chapter 13, and I have a couple of friends that are post-editing for me. The two friends are both much smarter than I so that will only help out the overall reading experience of the novel.

As soon as the new edit of chapter 1 is complete, I'm going to post instead of the current sample that I have listed now.

Still no pre-orders, but I'm not discouraged as I see the progress of all of the other books (that there quite a book of good ones that I'll want to read).

I am looking for feedback on what you have seen so far and ways that I can improve the presentation, even if I don't succeed in meeting the pre-order numbers, although I'm hoping that the book does.

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