Sep 16, 2015
As promised yesterday, a new updated version of chapter 1 is posted. This includes some grammatical fixes, tenses being standardized and clarifications in some wordy sections. So if you'd like to take a gander, feel free. Also, be sure to include any feedback of something you liked or didn't like so I can review it to make the book better!
Thanks again for all of your support in making A Distant State come to life.