I absolutely cannot wait to get this! The casual description of horrific scenery just blends with Mike's POV so well, from what I've learned about his character so far. The chapter I've read so far really reminds me of both Dark Souls and Diablo, because of the macabre descriptions and the foreboding warnings that O'Neil gives. With one chapter you've peaked my interest and I can't wait to read more once it's published! Well done!