Sep 23, 2015
Good morning reads! Okay I made some changes, so sue me! No, not really but it's sounds so confrontational, something my main character would say--if he were in a good mood.
I am writing this to let you all know about changes.
First, I changed the title from To Kill a King to Kingslayer. I made this change as I was working in book 2 and 3. Since this is a trilogy I felt that the name's of the title should progress together and this change reflects the names of the squeals: Renegade (Book Two), Eiharijar (Book Three).
After this change, I restructured the chapters so the read smoother, essentially making better scene breaks.
I also decided to lower the mature rating of the book from mature to pg 16. I hope this will help new and old readers feel free in following the narrative. The scenes in question are still there and intact, I just changed the descriptions and details.
Last of all I have uploaded a new chapter! Anyone else interested in finding out who this General Abriel is?
Thank you for following along and I hope you dig in to the new post. Please feel free to comment and share as you read. I love feed back, both the positive and the negative.