I'm very much enjoying what I'm reading here. Very strong first chapter, though my only problem (and it's very slight and really just my own opinion) is that the last bit of Alvina's escape from shuttle with the baby felt like it should've been a bit bigger, especially with the after effects of her falling into unconsciousness, it felt quick and like she made it with not much trouble. I'll have to read it again to see if my opinion changes on the matter (which I have no issue with doing), these are just first thoughts though. Really liking where the second chapter is going and I'm already shipping Baako and Alvina. ENDGAME #TeamAlvaako xD Keep it coming!