Exile, Magus Chapter 1, Sections 1-3 by Thomas Arnold
This excerpt tells the beginnings of a story about a father and son who aren't like all the other dwarfs. They are slightly peculiar and are a bit of outcasts in their own society of Thierdenvolgenlunders. Magic is forbidden but the son, Pentaz, has an interest in expanding his knowledge. Somehow, currently unknown to the reader, a highborn named Kerutda - The Lady of the Hammers- has gained this knowledge and accused Pentaz of witchcraft. Pentaz father, Duertanso makes a deal with the high court that Pentaz shall fight in an on coming battle and prove his innocence by not using any magic in his moments of need.
The except leaves us with a secret meeting between the High Lord and Duertanso, seemingly friends, in which they discuss the matter of their little "Pentaz Problem" and the ensuing battle.
The writing here and the level of imagery are sure to pull you into this world quickly and not let you go. I can't wait to continue reading and I'm excited to see this reach its funding goal!
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