First Draft is Complete!
Thursday night at about 10:30 I wrote the final words of the Deus Hex Machina first draft. I had been pressing to get it done by the end of June, and through some help from motivational guru and all around fabulous person Elayna May Darcy (seriously go order They Are the Last, it’s funding now and it’s awesome), I was able to get all twelve chapters finished on time.
So what happens now? Well, first off I’m going to celebrate with some gaming. Then probably Tuesday I will start working on my short story for Too Many Controllers. After that is complete it’s time to start planning for the Shadow of the Owl sequel, Shadow of the Panther. I know many of your have been waiting to find out what happens to Mylena in [spoilers], and I promise you I haven’t forgotten her.
That’s not to say things aren’t progressing on DHM. My cover designer is already working on comps and I have a developmental editor lined up and waiting. But first, I want to get the first draft in its raw, unfiltered state into the hands of a few select readers to get initial impressions. If you are someone who likes to help make a good book better, I am trying to build a beta reader group. Please email me amanda [at] goldleafbooks [dot] com and let me know that you’re interested. Warning: must love cyberpunk and have an eye for spotting egregious errors in the plot.
Once I have the round done, I’ll head into the second draft and fix anything that stood out to me and my readers (I have a mental list of weak areas I want to shore up). After the second draft is complete it will be off to dev edit land, and hopefully, plot perfection.
Thanks for following along on this journey. The book is done! Let’s celebrate!
We hit 170 orders, so it’s raffle time!
Isidore RAM barely notices the time pass as she packs her things and meets Qathren at the lift at the end of her hallways. Within her war both excitement and terror, and she is not sure which she wants to win. Sister YiB is not as boyant when Isidore meets her. Her face is dark and brooding, and she looks as if she is going to a funeral rather than on an adventure.
“Are we truly going to leave the Sanctuary Sister?” Isidore asks, unable to contain the question.
Qathren looks up, . . .
Chapter Two is live! I’m so happy to introduce you to Dax and his crew. I can’t wait to here what you think.
So look what arrived yesterday:Most of these are for those fabulous readers who won my Deus Hex Machina raffles. I’m feeling a little punk right now, but I couldn’t help but share. When I feel better I will sign these and send them off to the winners.
We’re 8 orders away from the next raffle, so if you’ve followed DHM, enjoyed what you’ve read of it, please consider ordering.
Okay, that’s it, back to resting. Have a good weekend!