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I like it.  Nice hook and it moves along.
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    An enigmatic young woman hires an ex-Army CID Officer to investigate a decades old homicide case that is eerily similar to a recent gruesome murder of a young woman in a small coastal southern town with a dark and violent history.
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    I just read the posted chapters of Moose Like Espresso.  The concept, characters, humor, first person narrative and pace all clicked for me.  I think the pace and rhythm  of the story would benefit from removing more words.  Some of them aren’t necessary, repetitive sentence subjects, for instance.  The old adage "you keep a reader with every unnecessary word you eliminate" is always good advice. 
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      Book one in a character-driven middle reader series about an Alaska Native teenager living in small-town Alaska. While helping his dad at the Moose Like Espresso Cafe, Rigs Seward gets a firsthand look at the locals, and all of their local drama.
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      Book one in a character-driven middle reader series about an Alaska Native teenager living in small-town Alaska. While helping his dad at the Moose Like Espresso Cafe, Rigs Seward gets a firsthand look at the locals, and all of their local drama.