I rewrote Chapter 3. My original idea was to have the Team split up into 3 groups but the 3rd group came out ultra generic so I scrapped that idea. I’m happy I did as well. I’m really digging the three characters I have and the predicaments I’ve put them in.
I just uploaded chapter 2. It’s a lot of fun to write. They style may throw off some people because I’m not stopping and explaining, but things will get clearer as the story progresses.
I’m keeping the chapters short because I like that style.