Miriam DuFour has been cheated on, tossed out of cooking school, and is about to lose her apartment. Her only saving grace is a small café she inherits in the small town of Achewillow. A place where strange and dangerous things live.
So you’ve inadvertently trapped an ancient trans-dimensional god in your backyard shed; what do you do? That’s what Venus McKenzy and her friends would like to know.
You have been doing a lot of telling instead of showing in the book up to now, and a lot of it came across as uninteresting. This paragraph, too has the form of another infodump, but it is different. This is the first time the reader is sufficiently engaged with the information, and as a result, this one works very well.
