Just a subtle, but perhaps nonetheless powerful, update to the project page today. I have changed the short description. This has come about after re-running a plot analysis and review. The story is still the same and the chief pro- and an-tagonists have remained. I have ’retarget’ things a little. The new short description now reads:
’It always causes enough trouble when any son rebels against the family business, but when Mummy is a supreme deity things are going to get real ugly.’
I feel this is a more powerful ’elevator pitch’ and avoids the trap of people thinking it is ’Just another generic story’. Also, as soon as I’ve worked out how to do it I shall be including some more graphical stuff in the about section too.
As always, I am very interested in everyone’s thoughts and suggestions.