OK - this is just chapter 1 in this crazy idea that came to me one day (not even sure where it came from).  I am still working on the tail end of this chapter as it is rather a hot mess.  Soft critiques are welcome as this is a very rough 1st draft.  Thanks!

Glad you posted that...I thought it might have just been me that had no idea where to post the crits. 

So, if I want to join the fun (okay, yes, I have my eye on an author prize), how do I go about properly delivering those critiques? Yes, it is embarrassing how little I know about anything, I will definitely hide in a hole for a few minutes after writing this comment.

Especially if I should find myself doing hard critique for whatever reason, I don’t want to put them in the wrong place. Do I email the authors? Mark up stuff in the draft page? And how is that tallied in the end?