Wow. This is some great writing. That list should expand a little, but still... It creates an image or these things wafting through the air of her imagination, and then I especially like how it ends, with a mention about how God sees time - all at once - omnipresent... These things are things not yet made but already known, only to God.

Woah now! Please tell me this is something that will get unpacked later on... I know there are hints here and there about how God likes to tinker with his toys - he ignored his wife, after all. But why is he tampering here and now? This is a pretty big turning point that deserves some attention! :)