I liked that intro, right into the action, or conversation as it were. I also like that it starts kind of like a prologue, with us seeing the results of Atlas’s absence before we even meet the character. Definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes!
For his 10th birthday, Atlas was kidnapped. Taken to the planet Titan, 900 light years from Earth, Atlas and his friends must fulfill an ancient prophecy by gaining control of the Celestial Sphere. If they fail, the galaxy is doomed.
This seems like an awesome idea. Time travel is cool all by itself, but the idea of forward jumps with the knowledge and experience of backward jumps is really intriguing.