You think being a vampire is easy, but Bob is here to set you straight. He’s been shot, stabbed, survived bad coffee and endured crippling boredom - all in the name of answering the eternal question of what it means to be a vampire.
I like this sentence a lot, in fact I like the whole work a lot. And I agree, the only issue I can see is with tense. I really do find myself already liking the character, as little as we know.
My heart doesn’t thud as loudly as it had only months before. It has had much more practice at containing the adrenalin coursing through my body. It knew how to savour it, knew how to expend it, and most importantly knew exactly when I needed it
Isabelle’s life spirals into one beyond her wildest imaginings when she meets Death’s right-hand man causing worlds to collide. She’s thrust quickly into the most secretive inner-workings of Death itself, as well as an otherworldly dominion.
