Andrea L Boyd commented on an excerpt of Slipping
Nope. Just me forgetting. I’ll fix it for the next corrective upload.
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    She was calming down now, and she took another step forward. Into his personal space. He could smell the clean scent of her, even above the deliciousness simmering behind him on the stove, could pick out the barest of freckles peppering her nose and cheeks, the tiny mole she had on the tragus of her right ear, peeking out between her curls. Curls that were now sparkling in the bright, directional lighting of the kitchen. “This wasn’t some stupid, made-up threat, Ibrahim. This was a real threat,” she said and laid her hands on his chest, setting off little sparks where she touched him. He mused at her ability to do that still, after all these years, frowned at the little frown lines between her eyebrows, noticing the stray hairs encroaching there, caught the shimmer of light on her eyelashes, still wet and spiky from her crying. “And one of your men died today,” she almost whispered.
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    Andrea L Boyd commented on an excerpt of Slipping
    Half = half lift, as in the elevator that only stops on the middle floor (half way up) and the bottom of the Ziggurat. I don’t know how to say all that here, though, since no way would Bek add any of that when referring to it.
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      Andrea L Boyd commented on an excerpt of Slipping
      It is.
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        That was part of the fun here, I thought: even with nanobots and everything, we still can’t get wine stains out. Though, I DO like the future where everything is waterproof...
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          Thanks for all your comments, S.E. This is fixed in the current iteration; I haven’t uploaded it yet.
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