Great way to end this part of the prologue.
For the first time in almost 15 hours they stopped, they ate, and they slept
the store was a gingerbread house
I’m not sure ’whilst’ is the best word to use here. ’As’ seems the most fitting, but as you just barely use that before "choking gasps", I don’t know. ’While’ seems sufficient to me, though.
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