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I am the beast in your closet. I am the demon beneath your bed. I am the elephant in the room. In my...
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A surreal horror story about an ancient faceless evil that enslaves souls, unleashes demonic forces and needs help figuring out why its emails aren’t being sent.
Nick Nafpliotis created a forum thread: Cover Image not appearing in search
The cover image I have posted appears on my page when I go to it, but not when it’s found via discovery/search. 

Is this simply a matter of time, or do I need to do something on my end to make it appear?
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Nick Nafpliotis commented on This Carnal Cold
Really good first chapter. Have you considered maybe writing in an intimate third person perspective instead? I feel like that would free you up more to ramp up the atmosphere (which you do very well) while still keeping things claustrophobic, scary, and personal.
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    A small town with disturbing secrets has shared dreams that leak into reality, but when a young boy dies of a mysterious illness his older brother and the rest of the town are trapped in a real, deadly and permanent nightmare.
    Nick Nafpliotis commented on B R E A T H L E S S
    Love the opening, especially the last couple lines. Very good visuals. A couple clunky sentences here and there, but otherwise excellent concept and execution so far!
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      Nick Nafpliotis commented on Fate is Inevitable
      Really like the concept so far. I do wish, though, that we maybe saw some examples of how the predestination aspect worked. One idea could be to type up some news articles detailing the discovery of the phenomenon and how it plays out--especially when people try to change fate by taking their own lives.
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        Nick Nafpliotis commented on Snipe Hunt
        I won’t be adding all the chapters here, but I will add a few more if there’s interest and/or a desire to give feedback!
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