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Just a quick update to let everyone know that the beginning stages of the developmental editing process are proceeding nicely. I promised a behind-the-scenes look, so read on if you’re interested in hearing more....

My developmental editor, Matt Harry, and I have spent the past month passing an 11-page outline back and forth. At this point, we have settled on the arc for the story as a whole, and the arcs of the main characters.


I am thrilled with the tweaks to the original storyboard and feel that the alterations and additions to the initial plot will serve to reinforce the themes. I am eager to see where it leads.

Now that the outline is complete, we are moving on. I am currently spending a few hours a day working on rewriting and editing the first 100 pages to turn over to Matt so that he can provide page-specific notes. As of now, I have worked through about 60% of the first section, and hope to complete it within a week.

Matt will then work through the first 100 pages as I edit and rewrite the next 100 pages. We will then do this with a final section (the book will likely end up between 250 and 300 pages). Because we are adding new scenes and drastically altering others, the second and third segments will take a bit longer to work through.

After the first round is complete, we will rinse and repeat a couple of times until we are both happy with the story.

So, there you have it. As always, thank you for the support. Every day that I sit down and write, I think of all of you. I am forever grateful for this opportunity.

Until next time,

-Jacqui

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    Hunter Red commented on It Was In A Coffee Shop
    So yesterday I got an email telling me that It Was In A Coffee Shop had made the top seventy-five in the Inkshares Launch Pad Contest.

    https://www.inkshares.com/contests/launch-pad-contest

    Unfortunately it wasn’t this version of It Was In A Coffee Shop that made it to the top seventy-five.  It was this one:

    https://www.inkshares.com/books/it-was-in-a-coffee-shop-bbf108

    Same book, I just had to post a new project in order to qualify for the contest.  So, please readers, go click follow on that project so that I can climb higher up the leaderboard of the contest.  I don’t currently plan on launching another pre-order campaign, given how poorly the current It Was In A Coffee Shop pre-order campaign is going, but I’m hoping that followers combined with Judge’s opinion on my project will garner my book some good attention in the industry.

    Thanks

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      Hunter Red commented on It Was In A Coffee Shop
      So Inkshares tells me it’s been four months since I sent out a comment about It Was In A Coffee Shop.  Four months since I last updated people on the progress of getting It Was In A Coffee Shop into the hand of the public.  Four months without much progress.  

      As it stands there are currently thirty-six days left in the one hundred eighty day campaign to attain two hundred fifty pre-orders.  How many pre-orders have there been?  Six.

      Six

      Six

      Six

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E99X4HCkENA

      So, yeah.  This sucks.  Well, at least I can look out my window and see the sunshine.

      (Looks outside)

        

      Okay, I need someone to fiddle with the dimmer switch on the sun.  Put the sun back up to full power now.  Thanks.
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        Hunter Red commented on It Was In A Coffee Shop
        So Inkshares tells me it’s been four months since I sent out a comment about It Was In A Coffee Shop.  Four months since I last updated people on the progress of getting It Was In A Coffee Shop into the hand of the public.  Four months without much progress.  

        As it stands there are currently thirty-six days left in the one hundred eighty day campaign to attain two hundred fifty pre-orders.  How many pre-orders have there been?  Six.

        Six

        Six

        Six

        https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E99X4HCkENA

        So, yeah.  This sucks.  Well, at least I can look out my window and see the sunshine.

        (Looks outside)

          

        Okay, I need someone to fiddle with the dimmer switch on the sun.  Put the sun back up to full power now.  Thanks.
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          Hunter Red liked an update for Sunshine is Forever

          Happy Friday!

          More reviews are pouring in! 

          School Library Journal calls Sunshine is Forever "Darkly comedic...perfectly paced."

          Starry Magazine did a full write up on the book that you can read here:
          http://starrymag.com/sunshine-is-forever/

          Be sure to rate the book on Goodreads as soon as you’re done! 
          https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/33534889-sunshine-is-forever

          Thank you so much for your support!

          Kyle T. Cowan
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            Hunter Red liked an update for Lost in the Fog

            Hi All,

            I’m long overdue for some news about Lost in the Fog, so here we go!

            First, I must express my continued gratitude.  Because of all of you, my novel surpassed the 250-pre-order requirement (272 thus far) and will be published by Inkshares!  Your support brings a ginormous smile to my face, and I am beyond grateful.  For years I’ve wanted to share Lost in the Fog with the world, and I will be able to do it because of you.  Merci beaucoup, danke schoen, arigato, mahalo nui loa, and thank you!

            Second, I want to provide an update to the question you all have: when will I receive my copy of Lost in the Fog?   While I wish I could give it to you right now, unfortunately the world of book publishing moves at a slower pace.  Here’s a recent example.  Robin Sloane, author of the outstanding best seller Mr. Penumbra’s 24-Hour Bookstore (which I highly recommend), announced to his fans on July 15, 2016 he had finished a new novel.  On September 5th of this year, Sloane’s Sourdough will be released to the world.   

            For those of you who don’t want to do the math, that’s almost 14 months from completion to publication for an author who just had a best seller. 

            While I’ve yet to have a best seller, the goal is to get Lost in the Fog to you a whole lot sooner.   Here is where I am with the process.  While I’ve gone through so many drafts of my novel that I’ve lost count, I am still working on one more.  When that is finished I send it off to the publisher, and then they assign an editor to work on it with me.

            The editing process can take several months, and then there’s the cover, the clean-up of the final version, printing, marketing, and distribution.  This meticulous process will be done to produce the best possible version of my book.  Because you should never over-promise and under-deliver, my goal for Lost in the Fog is that it will be published next summer. 

            Inkshares is located in the San Francisco Bay Area, and I plan on flying back there to sign every book before they ship.  So while a little patience is in order, I’m happy to report that everyone who pre-ordered a paperback will receive a personalized signed copy!

            Third part to this update: as we walk down the long and winding road to publication, I will keep you informed along the way and hopefully have some fun with it.  I plan to share with you, the ones who have made Lost in the Fog possible, special items akin to DVD/Blu-ray extras.  Here’s a sneak preview.

            In the beginning of Lost in the Fog (which you can check out right now on the "Read" tab), the main character Camden takes the Caltrain (the commuter rail) from San Carlos into the city of San Francisco.  Here is what he sees and thinks that morning:

            Tired and hungover, he could only stare slack jawed at the lavender and pink clouds which appeared to be crashing like waves over to the East Bay sky.  Camden couldn’t get it out of his mind that he was a yo-yo.  Slung up the Peninsula to San Francisco in the morning, he was suspended there in a “walk the dog” move for the day.  As the sun set the giant wrist flicked and he returned to his home thirty-five miles south of the city.

             At the Caltrain Depot in San Francisco, Camden exited with the mass of commuters and began his usual walk up Fourth Avenue…….   

            Below are some pictures of what Camden would have seen as he approached the San Francisco station on that morning, and also the view of when he exited the train to walk to his job as a gallery attendant.  Back when I was writing the first draft, commuting into the city was my life.  Those thirty-five to fifty-five minutes (it all depended on whether it was an express or a local), I used to spend working on Lost in the Fog.  That time on the train fueled my creativity and was very important to me. 

            Thank you all again, and looking forward to sharing more updates soon!

            -Michael

                

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              Hunter Red liked an update for Enter The Phoenix

              As many of you already know "Enter The Phoenix" did not make it to production and those who ordered should have received a refund.

              I was not expecting for another contest to arrive so fast. I know most of you follow "Tales From Mist Lake" I would like to say it has been entered into the horror contest.

              This is the last time for the year that I will be submitting "Tales From Mist Lake". Let’s see how things go. The link below is for all those entered in the contest.

              Inkshares 2017 Horror Contest 

               

              Journey to the town of Red Bear Texas. Explore Mist Lake in 13 tales of terror. The anthology of Red Bear is one to read, each story stands on its own, but connect to each other one way or another. 

              Preorder Tales From Mist Lake

              Thank you, Joshua L. Covarrubio

               

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                Hunter Red liked an update for Sunshine is Forever

                Campers!

                By now you should have received a tracking number for your paperback book! If you didn’t get a tracking number, and you are positive you ordered a paperback, e-mail hello@inkshares.com and they will help you sort everything out.

                Thank you so much for supporting the book! Be sure to post about Sunshine is Forever on social media, and rate it on Goodreads, Amazon, and Barnes and Noble!
                Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/33534889-sunshine-is-forever
                Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Sunshine-Forever-Kyle-T-Cowan-ebook/dp/B07426WLMD/ref=tmm_kin_swatch_0?_encoding=UTF8&qid=1502728007&sr=8-1
                Barnes and Noble: https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/sunshine-is-forever-kyle-t-cowan/1125356968?ean=9781942645627

                Preorders for my next book-KARID-will start soon! Be sure to follow it so you can get a limited signed paperback!
                https://www.inkshares.com/books/karid

                Thanks!

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