Oliver Tooley commented on Children of the Wise Oak
Thank you Matthew. I think I may have the strength to contact a few peeps I haven’t spoken to in years as well, on the strength of that. 

like

People who have liked this comment for <i>Children of the Wise Oak</i>

    Oliver Tooley sent an update for Children of the Wise Oak

    Not sure things have been progressing well to be honest. 
    People who I thought, for sure, would back my project, at least with the e-book, have blanked me. While others, who I hardly know, have backed me to the hilt. 

    No matter. Keep striving. I have edited ruthlessly and cut over 500 words, mostly description, from the text. My only critic (so far) said there was too much description so I took her advice. I hope, as well, I have eradicated most basic errors and made the proof reading/editing job easier. 

    Oh, there was one other criticism, it needs a map (or maps). I agree, I’m struggling with it though.

    I have also, rather arrogantly (considering the lack of pre-orders for this one) begun on the sequel. I recently found out what the "Bechdel Test" is, thanks to Janna Grace’s "Break the Bechdel with Strong Female Characters Syndicate", and since the sequel already featured one strong female character, I decided that she would call upon the other strong female for help when things got tough.
    "Women of the Wise Oak" will see Gwenn and Epona smash the Bechdel test out of the park. 

    Meanwhile, I have boldly re-uploaded the entire text of "Children of the Wise Oak" for all to see. Remember, if you support this book and it gets published, then the girls get to have a field day in the sequel. 

    like · liked by Clarkevirginia and 7 others

    People who have liked this reader update

      Oliver Tooley followed Worlds Walker
      Worlds Walker
      Andres discovers that living a normal life is impossible when the blood of monsters run through your veins.
      Ricardo Henriquez followed Oliver Tooley
      Oliver Tooley
      Spent 7 years as the lead singer in a Led Zeppelin tribute band. They said write about what you know...
      Follow
      CoRy Wyszynski followed Oliver Tooley
      Oliver Tooley
      Spent 7 years as the lead singer in a Led Zeppelin tribute band. They said write about what you know...
      Follow
      Oliver Tooley followed Ricardo Henriquez
      Ricardo Henriquez
      Winner of the Crypt TV Horror contest. Author of The Catcher’s Trap series and Bad Medicine: Slay it...
      Follow
      More items