Very hard to read, but for good reasons. I’m a dog lover :(
Otherwise, exceptionally well written. My only issue was some of the ’head hopping’ that took place in the chapter between the dogs and The Man. I’d keep it all on one perspective or separate each POV shift more definitively. Other than that, though, great stuff thus far.
Bonnie and Clyde. Sadie and Charles. Who needs modern day romance when tragedy is addicting? When Jane met Phillip she thought he was a god. She would do anything for him. But what happens when anything becomes sinister? Inspired by true events.
Very hard to read, but for good reasons. I’m a dog lover :(
Otherwise, exceptionally well written. My only issue was some of the ’head hopping’ that took place in the chapter between the dogs and The Man. I’d keep it all on one perspective or separate each POV shift more definitively. Other than that, though, great stuff thus far.