This is a very interesting premise. The beginning is really strong, particularly the prologue - I really liked Jay's voice and her interaction with Dr. Bloom. Also, the notion of Jay's nightmares being like breathing is very original, and poetic, too.
Is she crazy or is it all a horrible nightmare she can’t wake up from? Jayashree Atkinson has been told her whole life she’s crazy: after all, most people don’t dream while they’re awake.