Gotta be honest, though...I kind of hate your book teaser/log line. Felt way too cheesy/forced. Almost made me not give it a read, which would have been a shame since the content inside is great.
Gotta admit, I’m kind of sick of zombie fiction, but I like the concept you have here. Writing is very good and the point of view is fantastic.
If I were to make a suggestion, it might be to cut the creature giving itself a name. I’ve only read the first chapter so far, so maybe that plays a bigger part and needs to stay in, but I felt like the fact the creature could name itself took away some of the enticing mystery you’d been building up.
Otherwise--and even with the Dave part--good stuff.
Elizabeth survives a flu epidemic which sparks the zombie apocalypse, and feels her thirties aren’t going as well as she’d hoped. Then there are the tales of tall, mysterious creatures lurking in the darkness. Are the survivors the unlucky ones?
Hi @Nick Nafpliotis I can see your cover image when I search for your book. I am viewing it on Chrome. It might just be an internet issue or a browser issue.
A devout Christian farmer finds his only daughter in the midst of a ’so-called’ demon possession. But could something else be involved, calling his faith into question?
Gotta be honest, though...I kind of hate your book teaser/log line. Felt way too cheesy/forced. Almost made me not give it a read, which would have been a shame since the content inside is great.