Just finished the second chapter.  Harrison (the old man) really shines as a character. Can’t tell you how awesome this is, keep up the good work.  After you get 5 followers your ’Review’ tab will open next to the ’Discussion’ tab.  I’m more than willing to write some awesome stuff, this is excellent work.

     That first chapter paints the most realistic vision of early warfare that I’ve read.  The brusque kindness of the nurses (sisters?) in a battlefield hospital was touching.  The helplessness of being in a city being shelled comes through vividly.  Great work! Can’t wait to read more.