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Maddie I think it is wonderful that you have started to write a book AND started to work towards publishing. This is especially true if you are 11. I think you are very brave. I was 45 years old before I was brave enough to show my writing to the world!

I hope my comments are helpful and encouraging for you.
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    Obviously Carra has been sleeping inside. This is o.k. I am just a little confused that you don’t mention the house earlier on when you talk about ’living on the beach’. Perhaps you could mention a hut or shelter so it is clear.
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      I often start sentences in this way. I also try not to do it twice in a row.
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        An avid reader.I’m only 11 and have always wanted to publish a book please follow me .Thanks!
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