Hey, guys, I’d love a little feedback on the stories posted from my collection The Shadows are Moving. Specifically, I’m looking for reactions, reviews, etc. Whatever you think of them, negative or positive, let me know and let me know why. Now, I understand that despite me already declaring this book ready for funding, there might be some editing aspects that need critiquing. I am open to that, but mainly I want to know if you think these stories work. I might respond by explaining my take on the subject (such as explaining endings; in my opinion explaining a horror story is the surest way to make it no longer horror) but I am ready for it. Hit me!