Very skillful how you packed so much history into these two sentences. Names, occupations, family, conflict,.. twins...? I’m already quite hooked on your story, but just thought I’d point out that this little bit right here is where it reeeeally sunk in. This is interesting stuff, Chase.
The right man, Jack Foss, was known as a four-flusher, a shyster and a paid killer. He also happened to be my brother, though you’d hardly know it other than we look the same.
In 1883, a man is hunted for the mistakes of his brother, while a servant girl attempts to flee her lecherous master. Through pain and hardship, their paths cross unexpectedly, hurtling them toward an uncertain future.