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Happy weekend, everyone! We’re still doing well in the contest, but need a surge to keep consistent pace and challenge that lead pack. Remember, once we reach 60 backers, I’ll hold a raffle to give away a special limited edition signed artwork. Please help me complete my dream of becoming a writer/illustrator. Either that, or it’s probably off to Arkham Asylum for me. (By the way, my wife urged that I also apologize for misspelling Gryffindor in my last post. Shame on me, and 100 points to Slytherin.)

Meird, Like Weird

Now, just what kind of fantasy is this story? Regarding the world itself, it’s very much a mix of Narnia, Coraline, and Alice in Wonderland. Like those stories, most of the narrative takes place in a fantasy setting once our heroes journey to the dream realm. Without giving too much away, the strange land is known as Meird, the quirky, distorted home of all dreams.

Once in Meird, our heroes notice some strange absurdities. Like, why is there an ocean in the sky? Or, why does the weather seem like it’s alive? And is that flaming sword hilt significant, or just a party trick? Or is the writer just a hard-core Holy Grail fan? 

Back me and find out! 

Stay well,

Kevin

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    James Rasile liked an update for The War of Wind and Moon: Season One

    Hello lovely readers! I hope you’re having a relaxing weekend, or at least a productive one :) 

    I want to thank you all for pre-ordering, following, recommending and reviewing The War of Wind and Moon, Season One - your support means the world! A special thank you to Mike Mongo, author of The Astronaut Instruction Manual, for his boundless enthusiasm, advice and support as I try to work out how to be on the funding side of crowd funding (and for tweets like this one which left me speechless!)

     If you followed Wind and Moon before four or five days ago, I’d like to invite you to re-visit the project page to read the slightly re-jigged logline and blurb, thanks to several comments and private messages I received. While all the comments were very supportive of the concept of turning abused children into superheroes, I realized that I’d presented Wind and Moon as a ‘worthy’ concept rather than as a rollicking good story - which it is! The new logline and blurb focus on my protagonist, Mia, and her story, instead. If you were intrigued enough to follow but not pre-order then perhaps this could tempt you to take that next step! 

    Later next week, I’ll be putting up chapter 10, in which we will see how Mia, Tak and the Kazemotos will deal with Mia’s collapse and spontaneous attainment of super-vigilance. Chapter 8 & 9 were Mia’s ‘radioactive spider-bite’ scenes - the origin story (for Season One is exactly that: a super-hero origin story) moves into the next phase, now! 

    Enjoy the rest of your weekend, I look forward to updating you again soon!

    Wishing you courage and creativity, 

     Darcy.

    Pre-Order The War of Wind & Moon here!

    Visit Darcy’s Website: www.narrativedisorder.com

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      James Rasile liked the forum thread, Looking for feedback? Join Critshares!
      Lots of folks have been soliciting feedback on the forums for a few weeks now. As an Inkshares Drafter myself, I know firsthand how hard it can be to get feedback here. So I decided to do something about it!


      Critshares is a private group I’ve created on the online critiquing community Scribophile. Critshares was created to address the needs of Inkshares writers looking for detailed feedback on their work. The goal of this group is to help Inkshares authors put their ‘best foot forward’ in order to increase their chances of funding success. 

      WHAT IS SCRIBOPHILE?
      Scribophile is an active, online social writing workshop and writer’s community. It’s an incredible way to get detailed feedback on your writing, learn how to critique, make friends, and build an audience. The site also contains forums, public groups, and contests. I cannot stress enough how great it is, especially for new writers. And it’s free! FAQs here.

      HOW IT WORKS
      Scribophile works on a ‘credit’ system, where you earn credits to post your own work by providing critiques on the work others have posted.

      Critiquing earns you “Karma Points” (the site’s system of currency) which you use to pay for submitting. Once you’ve accumulated 5 karma points, you can post a work on the site. Each work ‘costs’ 5 points.

      Upon posting your first chapter, your work will go into the public ‘New Member Spotlight’ to help you get noticed and get your first critiques. Your work is guaranteed to receive 3 critiques from the community-at-large before leaving the spotlight. Critshares members are also guaranteed an additional critique from a group member once their work leaves the spotlight. 

      Typically, it takes 2-3 critiques to get enough Karma to submit. You get more Karma the more detailed your critique. This is quite easy to earn, but…

      NEW MEMBER BONUS KARMA!
      As an inaugural bonus, I’ll be gifting 1 Karma point (from my own Karma pool) to the first 5 new group members who join after the posting of this announcement and complete one critique. Scribophile gives you 2 points right away when you sign up. So you’ll be that much closer to posting your work and getting critiques!

      MEMBERSHIP
      Scribophile is free to join and use. There is a premium option which gives you access to additional features. Premium members also get a discount on a Scrivener license! 

      HOW DO I JOIN?
      1. Sign up for your free account. https://www.scribophile.com/join
      2. Go to my profile page: http://www.scribophile.com/authors/p-h-james
      3. Use the ‘send me a message’ link beneath my profile picture to request an invite to the group. You can also send me a PM here once you’ve created your Scribophile account.

      PLEASE NOTE: You have to sign up for your free account before you will be able to see any content or group pages on the site.  

      So if you’re serious about getting feedback and improving your work, come join the party!  Please feel free to PM me with questions, or post them here.
      Big shout out to @Billy O’Keefe for the logo, and @alex maher for referring me to Scribophile.

      DISCLAIMER: Inkshares and I are in no way officially affiliated with Scribophile. Inkshares is not formally affiliated with this group. I receive no form of compensation from either Scribophile or Inkshares for running this group, or soliciting members at either membership level. 

      @Heidi Rebstock  @Sam Fellows  @Luke Fellner  @Matthew S. Adams  @Siriano Lambert  @Nell Walton  @Emily Senft  @Catherine Hamlin 
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        Chapter 1 – The beginning of the end.

        I am what the nightmares fear. In a world of vampires and werewolves, I am known as The Angel of Death. I am the ghost story they tell, the horror under their bed. I am the threat to the newly re-created. I am the one who knows their transgressions and will come to punish them. I am the reason that humanity no longer believes in the supernatural.

        Creatures that were once thought real have become ghost stories around the campfire; or children’s . . .

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          Chapter 1 – The beginning of the end.

          I am what the nightmares fear. In a world of vampires and werewolves, I am known as The Angel of Death. I am the ghost story they tell, the horror under their bed. I am the threat to the newly re-created. I am the one who knows their transgressions and will come to punish them. I am the reason that humanity no longer believes in the supernatural.

          Creatures that were once thought real have become ghost stories around the campfire; or children’s . . .

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            Hi all,  Thought I would let you know how things are going on the back end of the book.  Things have been progressing well. I’ve started work on the second draft of chapter two.  There’s a lot of good ideas in it right now.  Some need to be moved to later in the book and some need detail. The one thing that won’t change, is that Josiah will get to meet Michaela, The Guardian when human. It will be interesting. 

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