I’d love to "see" more of her beauty. She needs a little more physical description.
“You don’t have a boyfriend? You?” Anna was surprised that someone who looked like Seireadan didn’t have a suitor. By human standards, all Fae tended to be beautiful and alluring, and Seireadan was no exception to that rule.
Would love to see what in his build or pose she’s responding to.
As Seireadan jogged down the steps at Independence Wharf, she ran past a Fae man in dark pants and a badly wrinkled shirt. The clothes were too nice, and too rumpled, for so early on a Sunday morning. That plus the disheveled hair, sunglasses, and air of arrogant satisfaction told her he was heading home after a fling. Despite that, she still caught her breath slightly. He’s… magnificent.
Does she do Wordpress? :P
Joking aside it might be cool to throw together a fake site for her services. You could use it as marketing material.
Actually going into some of the sex might help really sell the fact this guy has supernatural ties. I mean with his technique.
hot breakfast and an even hotter shower.